Thursday, August 09, 2012
Why New Zealand is good at rowing
New Zealand is a small country surrounded by water. This means we have lots of chances to use it. New Zealand is good at rowing because we have lots of water we can use. The athletes get comfortable about the water when they are very young. They also get to practice at college if they join a rowing team.This is why New Zealand is good at rowing.
This is Rohan's first go at writing an explanation. He has tried to include an opening statement, an explanation sequence and a conclusion. How do you think he's gone? Leave him a comment and let him know!
Posted by Rohan at 10:07 AM