Tuesday, August 07, 2012

Why are New Zealanders good at rowing?

New Zealand  is a small country surrounded by water. This means we can use it to help us with rowing. We are also surrounded by boats! Young people at college start learning how to row and  practice while are still young. They are in teams so that it is easy to practice. This is why New Zealand are good at rowing.                                                                                                                 
This is Juliana's first explanation. How do you think she went? Does she have an introduction, explanation sequence and conclusion? Let her know in the comments!

5 comments:

  1. wow i didn't know that we had tones of spare water.

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  2. wow i didn't know that we had tones of spare water.

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  3. WOW! Juliana
    You have done some great research about how good New Zealand is one of the best rowers. You would need to improve on giving your opinion because you just said that is why New Zealand.I wonder what your next step is and what writing are you going to write about next time.

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    1. Dear Anthia

      my next time I will write about volcanoes!

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  4. Hi! Juliana
    You did really well in your writing. I like how you said there are in teams so that it is easy to practice.

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