Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Life cycle of a butterfly


The butterfly lays the eggs. Then one caterpillar comes out of the egg. The caterpillar is green. Now the caterpillar turns into a chrysalis. The colour  of the chrysalis is green. Now the butterfly comes out of the chrysalis. It can be different colors.

Laura

8 comments:

  1. WOW! laura i really liked your story and i didn't know that a caterpillar is green and then turns in to a chrysalis! and your story was amazing to!!!!

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  2. Hi Laura

    I like the information you wrote about butterflies. I also like the part where you wrote Then one caterpillar comes out of the egg I also like this part too Now the butterfly comes out of the chrysalis. It can be different colors.I loved those parts. I think you need to improve on putting more information about the butterfly, chrysalis or the caterpillar because I really want to know more.

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  3. WOW!Laura
    You did a really great job at adding all of your information that you found out about butterfly's.You need to improve on a title because I didn't really know what your story is about until i read it.You did a really good job what do think your next step is going to be.

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  4. Hi Laura I think you did a good gob describing the life cicill of a baterfly.

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  5. WOW laura!I really like your information about butterflies and caterpillars.Next time you can make it a bit longer.















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  6. Good job Laura next time write how it turns into a chrysalis.

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  7. Good work Laura you have done a great job. I like how you said that it is green.Next time write how it gets out of a chrysalis.

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  8. WOW! good work Laura so that how! I did not know every thing in that infomation

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