Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Poem by Lawson

Breakfast For a Hawk

Along the orange edge 
 of day  
 a shadow webs through 

 the black forest
 for a black breakfast.
 He clamps 
 upon his prey satisfied 
 with himself, 
 he eats in comfort.


  1. Wow!

    Lawson you are a star.
    Your is the same as Mia's because both or the poems are outstanding!
    You are very good at it.
    You could teach me how to make a poem like your too.

  2. Nice poem Lawson you did well on the poem and the writing. Why did you name the poem breakfast for a Hawk?

  3. I love the description that you put into it

  4. Lawson it's a really nice poem i would like you to make a poem every time.