Wednesday, June 01, 2011

Report Writing: Noeramiah

Here is Lawson's Report on Noeramiah.  He is working on using the correct structure for a report.  Do you think he has succeeded?  If so, tell him in the comments!

Noreamiah is an eight year old girl. She was born on the 28th of September 2002. Noreamiah is 136 centimeters tall. She does not like to play outside mostly but loves playing tag. When Noreamiah is outside she'll be playing tag. Noreamiah's favorite colour is light green. Her favorite food is grapes. When she grows up she would like to be a dancer.
Noreamiah has black hair, and she often wears a blue head-band. Her earrings are the same colour as her head band. Her eyes are dark brown and her skin is a little bit less dark as her eyes. She a fringe that sometimes goes over her eyes.
Noreamiah's family is large. She is the oldest child in her family and has a younger sister named Pativai and a younger brother named Clayton. Her sister is five years old, and her brother is three years old. Noreamiah has nine aunts, eleven cousins, four grandparents, a mum and a dad.  Her mum is twenty eight years old and her dad is twenty nine years old. 


  1. Pt England Room 4 kidsJune 3, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    Hi There Noreamariah,
    This is the Room 4 kids at Pt England School.
    We have seen your lovely comments on our blog and want to say thank you very much!! Ezra wants to say "I get stronger from yoghurt because it has calcium, and kiwifruit has vitamin c so thats how I get bigger, better, faster and stronger! Thanks for asking! From Ezra and the Room 4 kids. Have a great Friday at Stonefields School.

  2. Ezra, Room 4, Pt England SchoolJuly 15, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    Hi Noeramiah,
    Ezra here from Pt England School.
    Thanyou for commenting on my post about cooking at the college. The green stuff actually is spinach, but good guess sayin apple!
    Have a good holiday,
    From Ezra, Room 4, Pt England School